Now it's time to write the first sentence of the first draft of the first paragraph. The introduction is a kind of funnel, with the narrow end (the thesis) ushering the reader into the body of the paper. In addition to presenting the thesis, the introduction also suggests the general organization of the paper.
1. Begin with a "compelling condition or situation"
2. Begin with an anecdote that sets the stage for the content of the paper
3. Use a quotation that reflects the theme of the paper
Use transitional words and phrases. Transition is essential if you want your reader to follow you smoothly from introduction to conclusion.
Transitional words and phrases are the tiny stitches that provide coherence within your paper.
External transition: Words and phrases that are added to a sentence as overt signs of transition are obvious and effective, but should not be overused, as they may draw attention to themselves and away from ideas. Examples of external transition are "however," "then," "next," "therefore," "first," "moreover,' and "on the other hand." Internal transition is more subtle. Key words in the introduction become threads when they appear in the paper's body and conclusion.
Transitional sentences create a flow from paragraph to paragraph. They include individual words, phrases, or clauses that refer to previous ideas and that point ahead to new ones. They are usually placed at the end or at the beginning of a paragraph.
Revision means "to look again."
1. Find a someone to read your paper with you present. Or if available, visit your school's writing center. Ask questions of the reader such as "are you confused about the order of the paragraphs", or "have I fully
supported my opinions". Certainly ask about punctuation and grammar.
2. Always read your paper aloud. Hearing your own words puts them in a new light. Listen to the flow of ideas and of language. Decide whether or not the paper seems sincere and that the tone of the paper is appropriate for your audience.
3. Listen for awkward or lumpy wording. Find the one right word, Eliminate needless words. Combine sentences being sure not to create run-ons.
4. Write strong declarative sentences. Don't be passive.
5. Eliminate ideas that don't support your thesis.
6. Avoid using profanity. Profanity is never appropriate in term papers and I'm always surprised by how many students submit papers full of profanity.
7. Check paper for formatting rules as per the syllabus.
